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Monotony

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Day by day.
Smile and smile.
Living my life,
There is no other way.

Night after night.
Cry and cry.
I sit alone and watch
As the mournful sun dies.

The dusk is grey,
And the moon descends
To join humanly fray--
To which my heart contends.

Day by day, and
Night after night.
Against happiness
I do not fight.
:) Any feedback would be appreciated.
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iceberg210's avatar
Nice use of repetition, as well as some really nice imagery. I like how the poem is able to 'convey' monotony as well as feel a tad monotonous, (that is in no way a complaint or a criticism, it's done so well in that it 'feels' that way but is still interesting and engaging). Great work!